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He stared at his lover
Boxed inside four corners
Her smile cold, frozen
His heart torn, broken

He touched her face
As if to grasp some trace
His eyes began to blur
At this painful sight of her

She did not say a word
She would not strike a chord
The silence crushed him so
Oh, the thought of letting go

He whispered in her ear
But she could not hear
She only smiled at him
With eyes glazed and dim

Her face was a mere memory
A shadow of what she used to be
Her touch, her breath, her warmth no more
A fleeting moment of what was before

He stared at his lover
Boxed inside four corners
Refused to believe; embraced denial
She, imprisoned. Trapped. Immortal.
:icondecayedmatter:
A man longing for his beloved.
:iconanithrarith:
This is really well done, very nicely expressed and a good starting idea...I assume he's looking at a picture of her? But anyway, it's an incredible piece of writing, and I love the way it comes full circle back to 'He stared at his lover/ Boxed inside four corners'.

~anithrarith~
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~decayedmatter May 20, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, thanks again. Yeah. He's looking at a picture. Most of my friends who read it thought it was a coffin. But anyway. Haha. Thanks again.
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:iconanithrarith:
Hee hee I obviously have a less macabre way of looking at things then. But no, well expressed, I like it.

~anithrarith~
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